Sounds good to me

Posted by Lotg (OZ) September 06, 2004In reply to Story of magic of creatures that fly posted by Smokey Stover on September 05, 2004

Can this sentence be shorter but without losing it's original meaning?

like "story of magical creatures that fly"? is it all right?

The phrase (it is not a sentence, since it lacks a verb) could be a tiny bit shorter, but why? It has a nice rhythm and a clear meaning. SS

Got my interest. What is the story of magical creatures that fly?